Bonjour, j’ai un devoir d’anglais à rendre et je voudrais savoir si j’ai fais des fautes vu que c’est évalué. Je vois mais la feuille des compétences en photo.

Bonjour, j’ai un devoir d’anglais à rendre et je voudrais savoir si j’ai fais des fautes vu que c’est évalué.

Je vois mais la feuille des compétences en photo.

Et voilà les phrases que j’ai faite :

Hello my name is Louane, and i am (j’ai pas envie de mettre mon âge) years old.


If i were an animal, i would be a cat because i sleep a lot.

If i were a flower, i would be a rose because I smell good.

If I was a day, i would be Sunday because it is the day of the Lord.

If I were a garment, i would be a hoodie for its comfort and softness and because we can hide if necessary.

If I were a movie, I would be Harry Potter because of its imagination and the connections between the characters.

If I were a season, i would be winter cause I'm cold and freezing.

If I were a part of the body, I would be an eye for its ease in observing absolutely everything.

if i was a fictional character, i would be Takemichi because i'm trying to save everyone.


This was my Chinese portrait.